英作って難しい〜…

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最近、ネット英会話では英作文の宿題が出されることが多くなった。
次のレッスンの時、講師に送信して添削をしてもらうというスタイル。

ってことで、今回は次のような宿題

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What advice can you give to someone who is planning to visit your country? Include information about transportation, accommodations, places to see, and dining.

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コレに対して自分が作ったのは以下のもの。

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もし、あなたが旅行で日本に来るなら、まず富士山を見てほしいです。
If you have a trip in Japan,the first I hope you to see Mt.Fuji.

できれば、４〜５月であれば、桜の季節で、空気が澄んでいて富士山との調和がとても綺麗です。
If you come there from April to May,the time is cherry blossom's season,and you feel the air is cold,but the season's air is vey clear,Mt.Fuji and cherry blossom mix balance is very nice.

そして宿泊は旅館で、たたみの部屋で布団を敷いて寝ると日本を身近に感じることができると思います。
About the stay place I recommend to register at Japnese-style hotel. And when you sleep,you can feel Japan if you spread bedding on the tatami.

たぶん、温泉も近くにあるはずなので、旅の疲れが癒されます。
Maybe you find Hot Spring in near place,and when you fall into it,you were cured.

オススメの食べ物はいくつかありますが、米と味噌汁と漬物はぜひ食べてください。
I recommend the food is a lot of thing,but Japanese-rice,bean paste soup and pickles.

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我ながらなかなかの出来栄えではないか…って思ってると、ビシバシに直されたのが以下。

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If you will have a trip in Japn, the first I hope you to see is Mt. fuji.
If you will come there from april to may, that is the time when the cherry trees are blossoming and you will feel the air is cold but very clear.
The mixture of cherry blossom and Mt. Fuji is very balance.
About the place to stay, I recommend a japanese style hotel.. When you sleep, you will feel Japanese culture more once you spread tatami and sleep on it.
Maybe you may find some hot spring near the place that will cure you if you will take a bath on it.
And lastly, there are many food to choose from in Japan but I recommend Japanese rice, bean paste soup and pickles because these foods are what common Japanese eat.

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ビシバシに直された〜とはいうものの、言いたい事はちゃんと伝わってるやん！これって、ごっつい進歩ちゃう？
まぁ、向こうも教えるプロっちゅうこっちゃし、それくらいは当たり前か…